Adding Detail

WAIT:Adding Detail To Sentences

A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

You can add to the

beginning

middle

end

of simple sentences.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

I was really happy Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course at camp Bentzion

Mr Jacobsen was really a good coach that helped us though the confidence course.

As we went down to the water I was nervous about sailing at camp.

I was nervous with fear about sailing at camp

I was nervous about sailing at camp when we got there.

After looking up at the terrifying wall We went abseiling

We went abseiling above camp Bentzion.