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Thursday 11 April 2013

FastFeet

 FastFeet
By Lisa Fuemana-Foa’i

Insert photo of story here, taken with netbook.


Main Characters:
The Main Characters of the story is Esela the fast feet and solomona
and the mum.


Setting:
This story was set at school felled and at home.


Orientation:
In the beginning Esela woke up very early. But he was so so excited to go to sleep. At lunchtime Esela and some of the children had been practising with Mr Togavale. In the whole
school Esela was the fastest eight year old kid and every one called him fast feet.

Problem:
The problem was that Solomon was trying to trick Esela buying telling him that if he put a tooth
under his pillow he was sure to find some money under his pillow in the morning.

Action:
The Action was that he didn't where has new shoes.

Outcome:
At the end Esela  came first and  Solomona was cheering from the side. When Esela open his
bag and got out his lunch box for his drink bottle.  

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