At night when we were going to sleep in the tent it was so cold that I didn't feel uncomfortable.
The ground was hard and wet. When it was the middle of the night we could hear
strange noises coming past . We could hear teachers growling it some people .
2 comments:
Great drawing Ofa.Good attempt at adding detail to your first sentence.
WOW Ofa
This is a funny camp story. I really liked you picture that you have drawn, but next time please check your spelling.
Well Done. Keep Up The Good Work.
By Rave
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