As kelly was walking she looked back and saw someone getting out of a black car with a goern on his hand going to rob the shop. So kelly rang the police on her phone . than the man run inside the shop.
As soon as the police just came they want inside the shop and told the bad man to take mask off. She was so surprised that the bad man was her dad.
Than he had to give all the things that he took from the shop and said sorry to his daughter.
1 comment:
Hi Ofa,
I really like the story that you wrote about a man robbing a shop. All you need to do is make sure it makes sense. Other than that this is awesome. Keep up the good work :).
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